Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Memory Sense

My Father Should Have Smelled Like Ink

Inspired by Bentlily’s prompt to write about how my father smelled

My father should have smelled of ink and paper,
from devouring every book within reach —
often chosen by size, not by subject.

I imagine him again at the kitchen table,
coffee and cigarette side by side,
a small act of triumph, or maybe denial.

If it was summer,
a finch tap-tapped at the window.
Only they two knew the code.

6 comments:

  1. You've painted a very sensitive portrait of your father with this wonderful poem. It's both visual and aromatic. More importantly, I feel him dreaming in the silence of this image.

    Samantha Reynolds touches countless people every day with her poems. It so nice to see the power of poetry manifest itself. Great work Melanie!

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    1. Thank you Richard. It was such a good idea to focus on one or two small things. Otherwise how do you ever put words to a person in all their complexities?

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  2. Love, love, love. The "secret code" at the end broke my heart. xo

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    1. Thank you. So kind of you to respond Samantha. You have an impact on so many people every day with your magnificent writing.

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